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The Feero Empire (My own story for Freesky) by instantzeny13

The Feero Empire (My own story for Freesky) by instantzeny13

Character Name: Crixen
Server: Sunset

This post#1 would be my official "EDIT LOGS" where you could see my updates of my story.
Introduction first: The story that I would make would be about the Wallpapers I made http://forum.fo.igg.com/viewthre ... page%3D1&page=1
Actually, the story is what's in my mind while I'm creating my wallpapers.
I don't know that there's an event like this until I saw this last 10am (GMT+8) that's why I'm happy now that I could share you the story behind my wallpapers.
The story is 100% made (not factual/based on Freesky experience)
Hope you would like it.

*Note: Sorry for some of my bad English and wrong grammar *

My story starts at post #2

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7/19/2009 I posted the first 2 parts of my story
7/20/2009 I posted part 3 and 4 at post #2
7/21/2009 I posted part 5 at post #2
7/22/2009 I posted part 6 at post #2
7/24/2009 I posted part 7 and 8 at post #3
7/25/2009 I changed the Font of the texts into Arial because in Times New Roman, the commas (,) and semi-colons (;) are
             hardly seen making the text/sentence sometimes misunderstood.
7/25/2009 I posted part 9 at post #3
7/26/2009 Major Revision: I made some of the words "day" into "days", "month" into "several months" because I noticed when I
             re-read my whole story that all the events just happened in few months.
             I revised it so that every event would take a longer time to happen.

7/26/2009 I posted part 10 at post #3 (8 more parts to go ^_^)
7/27/2009 Just a note. In my story, I called the "NPC zones" as "Resource zones" because using the name "NPC zone" in a      
          seroius story is lame. Just saying because others might think that the "resource zones" are the buildings in the
          city map.

7/27/2009 I posted part 11 and 12 at post #4
7/28/2009 I posted part 13 at post #4
7/29/2009 I posted part 14 at post #4
7/30/2009 I posted part 15 at post #4
7/31/2009 I posted part 16, 17, and 18 at post #5 Story had ended =)
7/31/2009 I rephrased some of the sentences in Part 16: Rectification
8/09/2009 Fixed major typos






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Guys, If you see any typographical errors or if you see some sentences which needs to be rephrased in my story, please do inform me by posting/replying on this thread


My story starts at post #2

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Part 1: The Past

       Holy, Devil, Light, and Shadow used to be as one empire called “Feero” in the past and was led by King Rezzaztruz. The king always tries to maintain a harmonious relationship between him and his people. He always asks his people’s opinions about his plans for the Empire and tried not to be autocratic.

       But then, selfishness had arisen among some of the Empire’s people and started to fabricate their own inconsiderate “agenda”. King Rezzaztruz tried to stop them from their plan of separating from the Empire but he failed. Only Valin Race remained from the Military sector, and none from the Commerce sector.

       The Feero Empire was divided into 3 then, namely, Holy; who are the people left in Feero empire, Devil, and Shadow. Holy Empire was left depressed. It lost a lot of its people; and the worst thing was Devil took the Empire’s soldiers and then Shadow took Feero’s resources and airship parts.

       Shadow, having thoughts that the Feero Empire is taking actions against them, attacked the Holy people. They cursed almost half of the Holy Empire’s population to vanish, including the King’s only daughter, Lumina. The events resulted to the Empire’s downfall. The three groups had came up to a covenant that they would pick the own continents where they will build their own respective Empires.

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Part 2: The Nature of the Four

Holy

        The separation and death of some of the Empire’s people was a disastrous event in the history of Feero. Months after the separation, King Rezzaztruz died of too much depression because of what had happened.

        The Holy Empire’s now have been led by Valin Race, who was a pilot of one of the Warships of Feero back then. The Holy people loved Valin Race so much because the way he managed the Empire is like the same way how King Rezzaztruz did it.  He is open to his people and always tries to deal with problems with his people not all by his own.

        Crixen, a wise man of their kingdom became the advisor of Valin Race. Crixen helps Valin Race in making plans and in making major decisions for the whole Holy Empire.

        Though prosperous, Holy Empire’s military force is not yet that powerful due to what Shadow and Devil did. The two schisms took Feero’s resources and airship parts that is why nothing was left for the Holy.

        But who knows how powerful Holy Empire would be in the Future? Their fate now rests in Valin Race’s hands.


Light

        Lumina, the only daughter of King Rezzaztruz, is the mistress of the Light. Some of the people of Feero Empire were though to vanish since the Shadow cursed them. But they did not vanish; they were cursed to become “Light” in a supernatural form instead.

        The Light people’s guise is unknown for nobody have seen nor tried to find them after they were cursed by the Shadow , though, their presence are still felt by the other factions because “Light” has a strong aura, making no person not to sense it.

        The Light has neither material possessions nor armies. They were waiting for people to break the curse that the malefic Shadow had put to them. Self-sacrifice is their principle; “Live for others, not for oneself”

        Will the light still be seen? Is still there hope for the curse to be broken?


Shadow


        Shadow is led by Heeyon, the former Auditor of the Feero Empire. Shadow is known for their desire of possession.

        The Shadow Empire is the richest among the factions for they conquer and plunder every town they see. Because of that, he could manage to create big fleets in no time, making the Empire both bloom in Military and Commerce.

        Greed is the principle of the Shadow; “To live is to conquer, to lose is to die.”


Devil

        The Devil Empire is located in Hades. They thrive in the fires of the Netherworld. Among the factions, Devil is considered as the strongest, even feared by the Shadow.

       Having them being able to learn how to manipulate the flames of Hell made them more powerful. With that, they could burn a town in no time with their full will.

       Since they took the Feero Empire’s soldiers and having the ability to manipulate flame, after months of researching the skill, they empowered their fleet with the “Nether Fire” technology which made them more dreadful than before.

       The leader of the most feared faction is Margaux, who is the former General of Feeros, the fallen kingdom.


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Part 3: Greed

        After months of separation from Feero, Shadow Empire’s wealth bloomed. Their leader, Heeyon, was able to manage conquering and plundering all the resource zones in their territory and was able to manufacture Airships from the resources they gathered.

        But Shadow never got contented with what they have. Heeyon’s desire of possession truly lives in him. He started by planning to infiltrate and conquer the resource zones in the territory of the other factions. Contentment is a never to Heeyon; he spent all his resources and made it all into airship parts. He built more and more ships until no parts nor resources were left.

        He began sending huge numbers of fleets to Holy and Devil’s resource zones; used Shadow Magic to his fleets for it not to be seen by the unwary victims. After weeks of voyage to the two empires, he destroyed and plundered every unoccupied town he sees. The two nations got angered because of that action that Shadow made. But because Heeyon’s fleets are too large, he succeeded with his plan and got some of the resources from the zones of the two but left with some casualties because his targets defended their respective resource zones



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Part 4: Collusion

        Heeyon’s infiltration plan failed. The Devil and the Holy are so watchful that they noticed the Shadow’s plan of infiltration. The leader of the Devil, Margaux, got angered and prepared his ships for a war. He sent their massive Nether Fire fleet to the Shadow Empire. Heeyon heard about that plan of Margaux. Due to fear of his Empire being burned down into ash, Heeyon, armed with his evil plans, immediately went to the Devil Empire to negotiate peace and then sales-talked with the Devil.

        Heeyon tried persuading the Devil leader to connive with him. He told Margaux his plans against the Holy Empire. Margaux, being innate evil, was convinced then by Heeyon to connive. So then, they began fabricating plans and then smoothened it; leaving the Holy Empire left unwary of their conspiracy


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Part 5: Shadows of Nightmare

        Shadow and Devil, after their plans smoothened, started sending their fleets to the Holy Empire. Weeks after sending their fleets, it finally arrived to the Holy’s castle and the clash had started; the Devil focused on destroying Holy’s buildings using their Nether Fire while Shadow focused crushing the Holy’s fleets.

        The Holy tried to resist the unexpected attack. They quickly sent out their forces and tried countering the invaders. Though their fleet is nothing compared to the enemies’ army, their Dock is fully armed with cannons; causing Shadow and Devil’s Offensive Flagships to get destroyed

        For that reason, Shadow and Devil pulled out their fleets from the Holy Empire. Though they got their most important ships destroyed and failed to conquer the Holy, still, they were able to destroy some of the Holy’s buildings and plunder its resources as they planned.

        Holy Empire got more depressed of that another disaster. They haven’t recovered yet from the first one, and yet their efforts in rebuilding their land became futile again. The empire experienced its second fall.

        Will they be able to rise again? Everything lies in Valin Race’s hands.

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Part 6: Fallen Grace

“ Holy, holy, your beauty have been devastated
They took everything from you . . . and left your towns dead
Amidst the wolves, we shouldn't feel dread
Rise . . spread your wings and get all of them haunted "




        After the traitors’ attack, Valin Race has to fully rebuild his Empire, and it takes months to be able to do so. He doesn’t know where to start; he is feeling a bit discouraged. Good thing there are his loyal people who continuously support him and would be willing to help in reconstructing their fallen land.

        A day after, the Holy people started to repair the buildings left to their empire and started constructing the buildings which they lost because of the war. The resource gatherers worked hard for the Holy to regain the resources that Shadow and Devil had stolen. They have to manufacture parts and build it into airships just in case the enemies would attack again, so, they did not waste time and tried to work faster.

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Part 7: Despair

        The war cloud covers the Holy Empire again. The enemy attacked after a month, for the second time; but this time, only the Shadow alone; not accompanied by the Devil. The greedy Shadow destroyed the airships that Holy was able to build in the short span of time and then quickly plundered their resources which they produced in one month.

        Valin Race felt despair. The traitors are continuously annihilating their devastated land, and the worse, the traitors also keeps on pillaging all their resources; leaving nothing for the Holy. Amidst the test, Valin Race stood tall and continued his plan of reconstruction. He knows that someday, Holy would rise again. The enemies would see how they get crushed by the divine strength of the Holy.

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Part 8: Fiend

       The Shadow’s fleet after their successful attack went back to the empire. Heeyon’s attack was so successful because his forces went back with no losses due to Holy having few armies on its empire.

       Heeyon, being not contented, hired more researchers to study on improving their stealth magic.
Loss is a no to him. He wants to perfect their stealth ability so that their enemy, Holy, could not use Holy Magic , which could slow his fleet down and so that he could perfectly sneak on the enemy then destroy them in a blink of an eye.

        The Devil, on the other hand, knew that the Shadow, the faction that they conspire with, is developing their Magic. Margaux envied the Shadow; he also hired researchers so that their Magic would be also empowered. Weeks had passed and the Devil is still doing research. Margaux seems still to be looking for something. It is something that is destructive, something that could cause delirium and chaos to their enemy; A “Maledictor”, which could control the enemy’s mind.

        Margaux, knowing that Shadow is rich in gold and resources, quickly went to the ally’s empire and told to Heeyon his idea. Heeyon, thinking that Margaux’s idea would be great allocated funds for it and hired hundreds of people to research on how they could do Margaux’s idea right away.

        While the researchers are studying, Heeyon and Margaux send fleets to the Holy empire to plunder their resources.

        The researchers first thought of corrupting the Holy’s Magic. They sent spies to the Holy Empire and managed to imitate the Magic. But their plan of corrupting the Holy Magic failed. After their first hypothesis, the researchers tried combining the Shadow and Devil Magic; but it didn’t turn our good. On their third experiment, they tried modifying their second hypothesis; this time, they combined the two and then morphed it. They tried it on one of their soldiers and that person followed everything they order. At last, their experimentation worked. It took them several months to be able to discover how to do that idea of Margaux.

        After they succeed to their invention, they made a machine for it and it would be the controller of that devastating technology which could cause chaos to Holy. They installed it to their Defensive Flagship and then made it ready for battle.

The enemy made a disastrous weapon against the Holy. What would now happen to them?

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Part 9: Maledict

        Shadow and Devil, after several months of not sending big fleets the Holy, organized and sent their forces to the enemy’s empire and of course with their Defensive Flagship which carries the devastating machine that their researchers had invented. They didn’t use the Double time and Stealth Magic anymore because they endowed all of their mana to the Defensive Flagship and they are reserving all of it to that evil invention.

        Heeyon, Margaux, and their researchers are monitoring their fleets using the radar in their base. Their fleet finally arrived to the Holy, after weeks of traveling. The Holy quickly prepared and then sent out their new forces which they manufacture during the months that the two enemy factions are only sending small fleets to pillage their resources. The clash had started; Margaux, the General, ordered the pilot of the Defensive Flagship to turn on the machine. Their Malediction Magic was activated. Holy on the other hand used their Slow March Magic.

        The two magic had collided to each other. It created a huge explosion which blanketed the whole battle field. There were enormous shockwaves created by that explosion which made the Radar of Heeyon and Margaux not detect their fleets. The researchers never thought that it would happen. It was a failure; the Defensive Flagship where their Malediction machine is installed got destroyed because of being overwhelmed with too much power.

        After the shockwaves fade, the battle field clouds were cleared. Their fleets and Holy’s fleet became visible to the Radar again . . . but the fleets seem to move weird; they’re attacking each other – Foes or allies no matter what. The fleets became blood-thirsty, the fleets became Sanguinary. Attack planes to Attack planes, Frigates to Frigates, Battleships to Battleships, and Cruisers to Cruisers; they keep on destroying each other until none of them was left. The Malediction Magic caused delirium to Shadow, Devil, and Holy’s fleets and all of them got losses.

        Heeyon and Margaux got angered by what happened; especially Heeyon who hates losses. Much of their airships got destroyed and they also lost their Defensive Flagship that carries the machine in which they spent a lot of gold for it to be manufactured.

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Part 10: Concoction

       After the tragedy which made all their airships insane, Valin Race called for a general meeting which includes the Military officials, Commerce officials, his advisor, and the Holy people.

       They tackled about their plan of how to prevent and counter the enemies’ attacks. They also tackled on how they could avoid their resources from being plundered. Crixen, the advisor of Valin Race, suggested talking about building additional defense system for their empire so that enemies would think twice before attacking them. And also, Crixen advised the empire to hire researchers for a faster progress of their kingdom.

        They came up with putting advanced cannons to the Dock since it was the reason for the failure of the Shadow and Devil’s first attempt of occupation. Building advanced cannons needs too much manpower, so, the people decided volunteer themselves to work with no compensation. For the plunder problems, they decided to put some of their resources under the ground to prevent it from being stolen and then, also decided to build a Defensive Flagship for their base to work with the Dock during clashes. Valin Race decided to appoint some of their learned people to do research so that their empire’s progress would be faster.

        Hoping that their plans would work, they pursued with their plans and stood strong among their struggles. They started building cannons for the Dock and also started building their first Defensive flagship. The Holy started digging the ground so that they could immediately store their resources there to avoid pillaging. The appointed wise men prepared the equipments they would use during their research and then Valin Race organized a fleet who would accompany the researchers while they are studying.

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Part 11: Manifestation



          The researchers, right after being appointed, quickly planned to conduct their studies on how to make the Holy Empire’s production faster. They rode the Empire’s Tradeships, accompanied by some of the Holy’s forces, and went to the Lakes, Forests, Plains, Deserts, and Mountains.

        They first went to the Lakes and dived on it, they took some sand samples from it so that they could conduct a study   about sandstones. After taking sample sand from the Lake, they went to the forest to study every single species of tree that the forest have. After that, they went to the Plain and studied on how to fertile that land form and make it more efficient for farming. After researching on the plains, they divided the grouped into two; the other one cruised to find a desert and the other group went to the mountains. After days of cruising, the first finally found a desert and studied on how could have a desert near the Holy’s castle. On the other hand, the second group, whose task is to do their research on the mountains, tried to find a rich mountain far away from the castle. They found one went on conducting their research on it.

" When light eats the darkness . . .
and the soul inside you stood amidst all tests . . .
You would see the . . . Guise of Lumina.  "



       As they climb up the mountain, they found a cave whelmed with light. Out of curiosity, they slowly came closer to it and they one-by-one went in to the cave.

       The researchers were astonished. It is the Lumina and her people which they found. The guise of the “Light” people is finally known. The researchers were so stunned with the beauty of Lumina, even though it was not the first time they saw her. Her lips, her eyes; everything is perfect. The only thing is she is in the form of “Light”, as well as her people.

       The researchers were supposed to study about how could the Holy Empire be able to produce more metals but it’s the “Light” people which they found. They immediately decided to go back to the castle and report it to Valin Race. They asked the “Light” people to go with them.

       As they cruise back to the castle, the “Light” people gradually became humans again. At last, the curse of the malevolent Shadow was broken. The “Light” were only waiting for people to find them, so that the curse would be broken, and now the thing which they’ve been waiting for happened.

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Part 12: Return

        The researchers and the Light people finally arrived to the castle after days of voyage. The researchers told to Valin Race and the Holy residents about what happened during their study. After the happening was told, they had a celebration for it. Their long lost people finally came back. The Holy people quickly set up the tables, the food, and the wine.

        During the celebration, Valin Race told the Light people, who are formerly also their people about what happened to their land after they were cursed by the Shadow. Valin Race said to the Light that King Rezzaztruz died months after they vanished. Valin Race also said to the Light people that the two schisms betrayed them and keeps on pillaging their resources. The Light people felt sorry for that after hearing from Valin Race what happened to their land, Feero.

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Part 13: Endowment and Self-sacrifice

        Lumina’s heart wept after hearing that her father died and the two schisms keep on devastating the land of the Holy during the times that they were cursed to vanish. She is willing to help the Holy to rise again. Lumina, as the leader of the Light, possesses the “Light Magic” which they acquired while their souls were wandering and they are using it for them to be easily teleported to where they wanted; waiting for somebody to see them. It was handed to her for she was the mistress of the Light.

        Lumina, without the knowledge of the Holy people, endowed the Holy Empire with the Light Magic which will enable them to “walk in time”. The Holy people got surprised by what Lumina did. She would be greatly weakened and could have died if unlucky with what she did. The Holy gave Lumina their full gratitude, for that Magic could help them in the rebuilding and in the development of their fallen land. The Holy promised to Lumina that they will use the Magic she endowed to them for the good of everybody.

        Lumina believes that the Holy are upright. She knows that it was Heeyon and Margaux who are wrong and that the Holy would not do anything that would cause trouble.


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Part 14: Ideas

        After two days, the Shadow and the Devil strike the Holy again; but their attack did not become successful because the Holy prepared countermeasures against them. The Holy has now more cannons on their Dock and is accompanied by a Defensive Flagship which is also fully armed with cannons. Lumina completely saw Heeyon and Margaux’s wickedness. They really want to eradicate the land of the Holy.

        After the attack of the enemy, Valin Race called for a meeting again about making more countermeasures, including the Light people. Valin Race noticed that Crixen has been restless since the other day. Valin Race confronted Crixen and then Crixen told to Valin Race that something is bothering on his mind; an idea – A teleporting warship. Valin Race asked Crixen why he came up with the idea. Crixen told Valin Race that they might be able to use the Light Magic that Lumina had endowed to them. Valin race, after hearing Crixen’s response quickly set up and then started the meeting.

        In the meeting, Valin Race told to the Holy and Light people Crixen’s idea and tackled on plans on how they could make it. The people suggested Valin Race to create another Warship in which they would empower the Magic that Lumina gave to them for the reason that an ordinary Offensive or Defensive flagship do not have the capacity to bear that powerful Light Magic. Valin Race agreed with what his people had said. The Holy then decided that the warship that they would be making would be called the “Chrono Warship” and had decided that their valiant leader, Valin Race would be the one who would pilot the Chrono Warship; for he was one of the best pilot of Feero during its times. Valin Race is the man best fitted to control that powerful warship they would make.

        After the meeting, their architects and engineers started designing the Chrono Warship after days of making the design plan, the Holy’s workers started making the warship and then after two months of building, the Chrono Warship was finally built. It underwent many dry-runs and testing before they send it into an actual battle. During the planning, making, and testing of their new warship, the enemies are attacking them. The Holy tried their best to hide the Chrono Warship from the enemy so that they won’t be able to make a countermeasure against it.

The Holy now have their weapon against the enemy. This time, the Shadow and the Devil would feel the Holy’s wrath.

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Part 15: Wrath of the Holy

        The Holy prepared their newly made Chrono Warship and a 100k tonnage fleet to accompany with it for battle. The engineers made sure that the Chrono Warship’s engines are all in good condition. After the final inspection of the engineers, Valin Race, their leader, and the pilots of the fleet that would accompany the warship, embarked on their respective planes and airships. Valin Race started the machine and the Chrono Warship started emitting the energy which would create a warp gate that would lead them behind the Shadow’s main castle.

“ Turn the furious angels insane
For above all, we shall reign
Their tomorrows will be never;
All they would feel is pain

Let them be in misery
Let them be trounced by thee
Let them all hail you for all eternity
For it is time for them . . . to feel the Wrath of the Holy “



       The Chrono Warship and the 100k tonnage fleet successfully warped behind the Shadow’s main castle instantly. Valin Race started infiltrating the enemy’s base. The Devil quickly assisted the Shadow; the two factions sent their fleets out and attacked the fleet of the Holy. The two schisms were so surprised of the Holy’s attack.

       The clash had started; they began destroying each others’ fleets. Though Shadow and Devil’s fleets were larger, if combined, than the Holy’s, they are having a hard time to destroy even a single plane of the enemy. Holy’s power had truly become fierce. As the war goes on, it was like there were angels falling from above protecting every single airship of the Holy during the clash.

       Hours after the battle, Shadow and Devil’s armies and Dock cannons were wiped out. The two were not able to withstand the Holy’s ferocious power. Holy is too strong only having few casualties of airships. The Holy had undertaken both the Shadow and the Devil’s empire. They would pay for everything that they have done to Feero and they would regret separating from the fallen land.

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Part 16: Rectification

        Holy had truly become powerful after being helped by their long lost people, Light. The Holy undertook the enemies’ empires and levied taxes to them. Valin Race also reclaimed all the airship parts and resources that Shadow and Devil had taken from them. He replaced the two leaders of the schisms with his people and sent Heeyon and Margaux to jail. Valin Race assigned Crixen, his advisor, as the overseer of the Shadow and then assigned one of his wise men to lead the Devil and also appointed some of his learned people to become officials of the two nations. He surrounded the Shadow and Devil’s castle with his forces to watch the Shadow and Devil people’s moves.

        Now that the two schisms were led by the the Holy’s wise men, Valin Race expects peace between the Shadow, Devil and his Empire starting that time.


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Part 17: Persuasion:

        A month after the Holy’s occupation, Valin Race tried persuading the Shadow and the Devil people to come back to them and rebuild the Empire of Feero. It was hard at first but then the Shadow and Devil was convinced after weeks of urging.

        The Holy, Shadow, and Devil people decided to move their main castles in the following locations:



        So then, they started moving and building their castles on the assigned positions. During the war of the Holy, Shadow, and Devil, the researchers of the Holy discovered a new technology; The Miracle village. Since Shadow and Devil were occupied by the Holy, the researchers also studied on how they could apply to the two empires the Miracle Village technology that they discovered. After several weeks of the researchers’ study, the three nations started building their own Miracle Villages which would make their Empires productive and would make their armies more effective in battles.

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Part 18: Serenity

        Two months after the three nations started constructing their castles, their empires were successfully established. Lumina also decided to make an empire and she would call it the Light Empire. Because of that, Valin Race handed back to Lumina the Teleportation Magic that she bestowed to the Holy. Valin Race also sent some of his wise men and people to help the Light so they would be able to be successful in making their own empire. The Light Empire would be established at the remaining land below the Holy.

        Months after the Light people decided to build their empire, they successfully established their own kingdom and were able to make it bloom due to the Light Miracle which they also built while constructing their main castle. The Light Miracle makes the cities produce more resources; causing the land where it is built rich.

       Peace now lives through the four nations. There is no chaos, only concord. Though now belonging to different empires, the four factions act as one which makes it also like the Feero Empire; where all the people cooperate with each other, and is united.


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~ THE END ~





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Good job ^_^
can't wait for more

Awarding Negative Karma on people that reply on ads!

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Updated
I actually made 4 parts in 5 hours but I would be only posting 2 today 'coz I don't have time to type anymore the 2 remaining parts I made today.
I got to go at 7pm (GMT+8)

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cool story from 4 different perspectives!!
lol. when i said i hoped to focus more on my studies, i didnt mean for you to kill this game.

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^
Thanks
I'm gonna post/type tomorrow the 2 parts I was able to make today
and hopefully be able to finish making more parts (My estimate, it is about 16 parts all in all and could have more If I want to do so. )

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Nice !
I'm gonna keep track of this too just like what i did on your wallpaper thread
You are really talented

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